The girl stood there, in the middle of the ocean. Everything was going great. it seemed as if nothing could go wrong. The girl had everything going for. At least that's what she thought. But while she stood there, in the middle of the ocean, wave after wave came crashing down. The waves were coming down so hard she could barely stand to her feet. She stood there wondering what had she done wrong? Why had everything seemed so perfect, and now everything was falling apart. The girl started turning to things that made her feel as if she was rising above those crashing waves, but all they were really doing was pulling her down more. It seemed to her that she was losing everything. She had lost her friends, her grades were slipping, she couldn't find a guy, her family was falling apart, and her heart just felt so broken. Every time she thought she had found someone to help, they just broke her heart even more. She felt like she couldn't depend on anyone, and she started to drown. She slowly stood there watching her life fall apart, wondering why those waves had come crashing down upon her. Why did she deserve to have such a horrible life? Why didn't this happen to someone deserving? She felt alone in the world, as if no one was there. Tears finally began to fall from her eyes and dropped into the ocean. Her tears disappeared just as she was too. But then, out of nowhere came and voice saying, "you're not alone" and immediately after the voice, the ocean was calm. The girl could then stand on her feet again, and she realized what she had been missing all alone.
Tuesday, November 10, 2009
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Tori,
ReplyDeleteThis is very touching. I love it.
-Hannah G.
Tori,
ReplyDeleteawesome imagery :) i can definitely relate to how you were feeling here but it's nice to know that there's always Someone watching out for us that can take away all our struggles. good job!
<3 katy!
Tori,
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love this! This is so good and I love how you used imagery.We always have our low points but its good to know someone is watching over us!
-Kenzie
this is a really good blog Tori. It is good to know that when we feel like the girl in our lives that we are not alone.
ReplyDeleteCody Butler
Tori,
ReplyDeleteGreat Job! The blog was awesome and I think we can all relate to the girl at one point in our lives.
-Emily
Tori!
ReplyDeleteGood blog, I'm always here for ya girl.
-Kaitlynn
TORI!!!!
ReplyDeleteI absolutly love this. You are an amazing writer and i loved the imagery!
~KELLIE BURKE
wow...i feel the same way
ReplyDeleteholly
Tori you just really described how i felt a couple years ago and believe me it does get better :)
ReplyDeleteI love you girl
- Hannah
that is some great imagery and its good to know that we are not alone.
ReplyDelete-Devin-
Tori,
ReplyDeleteIt is good to know we are not alone. I did not know you were such a good writer.
I agree that it is definitely good to know that we're not alone.
ReplyDelete-Tyler
That was really good imagery. I think we all feel like that at some point in our lives.
ReplyDelete-Caleb
I know that life is painful. I lose sight of who I am supposed to be trusting in. Thanks for the reminder.
ReplyDelete-Ashley